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視頻課題:第十五屆全國初中英語教師基本功大賽說課視頻展示8下寫作課Unit 8 Go green3.江蘇 閔潔
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8下寫作課Unit 8 Go green3. 江蘇 閔潔
8下 Unit 8 Go green
Task: Going green
主題語境:人與自然 -- 保護環(huán)境
語篇類型:演講稿
語篇知識:通過英語學習獲得環(huán)境保護的相關知識
授課時長:45分鐘
文本分析:
本課是寫作課的第一課時。寫作的主題是 “Go green”。本課有兩個文本范例。范例1向學生展示了如何在寫作前進行信息收集以及分類匯總。范例2向學生展示了如何將寫作的草稿轉換為文稿。文稿按照總-分-總的順序展開,學生需要在寫作前研讀演講稿的文體特色,例如人稱代詞“我”的大量使用拉近演講者與聽眾之間的距離,排比結構的使用可以加強演講的語言感染力等等。本課的價值在于學生通過文本的學習、文稿的寫作,進一步理解人與自然的關系,在日常生活中身體力行的為環(huán)境保護盡自己的一份力。
學情分析:
本班學生英語基礎較好,學習態(tài)度認真,學習熱情高。學生已經(jīng)具備基本的寫作能力,基本能夠根據(jù)主題表達需要,使用恰當?shù)木渥印⒍温浜推陆Y構,來增強文章的條理性。但學生在歸納整理分類寫作觀點時還存在一定的困難。此外,雖然學生對三段式寫作的結構比較熟悉,但對演講稿的文體特征了解的不甚系統(tǒng),對人稱及排比的使用都比較陌生。
I. Teaching aims and learning objectives
By the end of this period, the students are expected to
1) express their opinions with the words, expressions and sentences in this unit;
2) use Millie’s notes as a model to organize their ideas into their own notes;
3) distinguish the notes and the script in language features;
4) use Millie’s script as a model to write their scripts about how to go green;
5) learn to evaluate their writings.
II. Focus of the lesson and predicted area of difficulty
1) Get the students well trained in writing a speech from the perspective of readers / audience of the presentation;
2) Get the students well trained in evaluating their writings.
III. Teaching approach
Process-oriented approach; PWP approach
IV. Teaching procedures
步驟 | 教學活動 | 設計意圖 | 互動時間&模式 |
Pre-writing | |||
Step 1 |
Ss share the activities during their Environment Week and the purpose of their activities. T invites students to think, ‘If possible, what other activities would you like to hold for the Environment Week?’ (Possible answer: make a presentation) Ss discuss in groups how to make a good presentation. |
在真實語境中與學生互動交流與本課主題相關的話題,引出環(huán)保主題,充分調動學生參與語言實踐的積極性,激發(fā)學生的興趣。 |
2’ IW |
Step 2 | Ss exchange their ideas on how to go green in their daily life. | 創(chuàng)設語境,導入主題,激活學生已有的關于環(huán)保的認知和經(jīng)驗, 為后續(xù)寫作搭建內容支架。 |
4’ IW GW |
While-writing | |||
Step 3 |
Ss read the notes to find out how to save water and power, how to reduce pollution and what else students can do to live a green life. T guides the students to design notes for their own script. (Focus on one aspect of the topic. Discuss in groups of four. ) |
以問題引導學生獲取信息,分析語言特征,通過比較分類等手段,指導學生將環(huán)保措施進行分類,進一步做好寫作前的內容方面的準備工作。 |
10’ IW GW |
Step 4 |
Ss read and analyze Millie’s script to have a better understanding of its clear structure. T leads the students to appreciate its rich expressions and various ways to show content. 1) How to have an attractive beginning? 2) How to make a presentation in a persuasive way? 3) How to have a convincing ending? T reminds Ss of the purpose of the script. |
通過分析Millie 的文章,讓學生對文本的結構有更清晰的認知,并欣賞演講稿的語言特色(人稱,排比……),增強學生在寫作中的讀者/聽眾意識,為寫作提供一個明確的方向。 |
12’ IW GW |
Step 5 | Ss complete the script with the help of their notes. | 落實到筆頭是初稿階段教學活動的主要特征。寫作之前分析腳本的結構,提醒學生為真正的讀者/聽者而寫,為真實的目的而寫。呈現(xiàn)本節(jié)課的寫作評價量規(guī),教師重點解釋本節(jié)課寫作的訓練重點。學生就環(huán)保的某一個方面,結合此前討論的要點,獨立完成寫作任務。本節(jié)課是寫作課的第一課時,只要求學生完成作品初稿。 |
10’ IW |
Post-writing | |||
Step 6 |
T reminds Ss of tips for making a presentation. T presents one of their writings on the projector, and assesses the writing according to the assessment table. T chooses some other writings and invites Ss students to assess their peers’ writings according to the writing assessment table. |
教師引領學生依據(jù)本節(jié)課的評估量規(guī)評價一篇作品。學生結合習作評價要求,參與評價,給出評價,與教師課后批改的作文評價相比,更具有現(xiàn)實性,同伴也更容易接受。 |
5’ IW |
Homework 1. Better their writing or script for a presentation. 2. Work in groups of four and design a poster for their presentation. |
課后學生在自評和修改的基礎上,進一步拓展、延伸寫作,讓學生感受到過程性寫作所帶來的成功感。 | 2’ |
Writing components | Criteria | Scores |
Structure |
|
10% |
Contents |
|
50% |
Language |
|
40% |
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