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How to write a good essay
-- using proper conjunctions
Teaching Aims:
1) Help students to improve their writing;
2) Enable students to use conjunctions properly in an essay; Teaching Focus and Difficulties: 1) What conjunctions are there;
2) How to help students to use the conjunctions correctly; Teaching Methods:
1) cooperative learning & individual learning; 2) task-based method; Teaching Aids:
1) A computer Teaching procedures:
Step One: lead-in Ask students to see two essays which are written by two students and tell which is better and why.
Step Two: Ask students to read the two paragraphs and tell which one is better; then finish the other two paragraphs using proper conjunctions;
Eg1. He works hard. He is not likely to have a successful career. He will still be a useful person in the society.
He works hard, but he is not likely to have a successful career.
However, he will still be a useful person in the society. Eg2. He helped me in time. I passed the exam.
Keys: He helped me in time; as a result, I passed the exam. Thanks to his timely help, I passed the exam. As a result of his timely help, I passed the exam. Eg3. My father didn’t criticize me. He praised me.
Keys: To my surprise, my father didn’t criticize me. He praised me instead.
Step Three: Brainstorming in groups: List as many conjunctions or phrases as possible. Write the conjunctions on the blackboard. References: 1.表并列或遞進
and, not only….but also, besides, morever, what's more, furthermore, in addition... 2.表轉折或讓步
but, however, although, though, in spite of, despite, after all, on the contrary, on the other hand... 3.表因果
because, since, because of, as a result of, therefore, so, thus, thanks to, as a result... 4.表目的
in order that, so that, for the purpose of...
5.表歸納
in general, in brief, in short, In conclusion, on the whole...
6.舉例: for example, for instance, take…for example, like, such as, …
7.時間和順序 :firstly, secondly…. For one thing, for another thing; on one hand, one the other hand; before, after, when,… 8.強調: especially, surely, at least,.. 9.條件: unless, if , on condition that……
Step Four: Finish the following exercises, using proper conjunctions; 1. Find out where they are going this evening_____ ask if we may join them.
2. He is seriously ill, _____the doctors have almost given up. 3. I’ve never been to Itatly, _________, I don’t know much about it. 4.They go to concerts of pop music, _______they really like it. 5. You must work hard, _______you will fail in the exam.
6. Fluent English can help you _________ communicate with foreigners _______ find a good job. 7. He is poor, ___ he is contented.
Keys: 1. and 2. so 3. therefore 4. because 5. or 6. not only; but also Step Five: Discuss in groups to add some proper conjunctions to the passage. And read their paragraphs group by group. I got up very early this morning.
I would pay a visit to a farm with my classmates. We walked 20 minutes. We arrived at the farm.
Some workers gave us a warm welcome. They showed us around the farm.
We enjoyed the beautiful scenery and the harvest. At noon, we had a picnic lunch. We held a party.
We were dancing and singing in the party. The sun was setting.
We said goodbye to the workers.
We felt really relaxed. We have learned much from this visit. Step Six:
Homework: Write a short paragraph about your senior life, using as many conjunctions or phrases as possible.
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